Oh my gosh, this is absolutely amazing! I love how you made Frank a goody-two shoes, but he's itching to be someone else. It's not really something you see, because most books are about the person who's rebelling and has always rebelled, not someone who's just starting. It's also very interesting to see a chaptered story by you in third person. It's very different, but in a really good way. Honestly, I don't think I can sum up how amazing this story is. It's so different from what I normally see from you, but, again, in a good way. It's interesting and suspenseful, as well as captivating. I absolutely cannot wait until the next update! Also, I wish you the best of luck at your new school! New schools always suck. If you ever need someone to talk to about it, though, I'm almost always open =3
Author's response
Ahhh, this review made my day! Thank you :D I'm so glad you like Frank's character; I really wanted to create someone different, y'know? Seriously, thank you so much, hearing this really means a lot :'D
Thank you, that's really nice :) I know, I hate going to new schools..ugh!
Thanks for taking the time to leave such a lovely review!