Brilliant. This is just absolutely amazing so far already! It definitley isn't dull. It kept my attention the whole time. Pete does seem like a creep but I can sort of tell he is alreading wanting to care for Mikey. I hope him and Gerard can work things out. This has just... blown my mind!!! I really love your writing. It just keeps me waiting for more and it's so interesting. I cant wait for more so please update soon before I die by withdrawal symptoms! :)
Author's response
Thank you very much! I'm really relieved that you don't think this is dull as that was one of my main worries. Pete is a bit of a creep, but a sweet creep nonetheless.
I'll try to have the next chapter up tomorrow night; I aim for a chapter a day if possible.
Thanks for taking the time to leave such a nice review! :D