Oh wow! This isn't dull or dragged out at all! You need to stop apologizing for your stories, trust us, they are incredible :)
I love Patrick so much, I just want to hug him and never let him go because he is so caring, and fluffy, and the fact that his parents didn't love him and that is why he cares so much for others just makes him so much more lovable :)
And Pete? Ha ha ha, he is so funny, his weird fixation with Mikey :)
I hope Mikey gets better soon, and I am earerly awaiting the next chapter!
Well done :)
Author's response
Thank you very much, I'm sooo relieved that you think this is alright! :D
I'm glad you think that Patrick's lovable, that's what I was aiming for with his character. I wanted him to be kind of like the fairy godmother; all caring and fluffy. ;P
Yes, Pete's fixation with Mikey is a little weird. Then again though, I'd probably be the same in his presence.
The next chapter will definitely be up later tonight.
Thank you very much for taking the time to review! :D