Oh My God. This is beautiful. Honest to god tears are pouring down my face right now. I'm not even joking.
This is... just... I can't. You are such a good writer. WHY HAVEN'T YOU WROTE ANY MORE WONDERFUL STORIES THAT I CAN READ!?
I am glad that Ben and you are better now, though.
But honestly, just the way you kept on saying 'he wasn't heard him', and oh god, my heart is breaking.
Author's response
I'm so sorry! Jesus, I didn't know people were going to react this way. Ben almost broke down himself, and I felt pretty bad about writing it. :(