Review for The Mysterious Boy

The Mysterious Boy

(#) tortillachip 2012-04-16

I'm glad Frank was there to help Mikey. He really does deserve the help Frank wants to give him. I also liked that Mikey told Frank what he thought about the kiss. It seems as if he's starting to trust him enough to even talk to him after what happened before. It really does show that Frank cares about Mikey and wants to protect him. Gerard does too, but Frank is really trying to work towards it. I thought this chapter was really well written. Great job!!!

Author's response

It was a really important element in this chapter to show how much Frank cares and how much he is trying so I'm very happy that came through. We do see the start of Mikey beginning to trust Frank but is still a little wary. Thank you for reading and leaving a lovely review!