This was so cute! The parallelism between Gerard and Frank's paragraphs made was awesome. I loved how the idea behind it, that you can be a complete and utter wreck and that one person can save you from yourself. Now if only that really happened. Hope you post more soon!
OXO
Author's response
Thanks! I'm glad the parallelism came across, I was worried that it didn't really work.
Thank you very much for taking the time to review! :D