Review for Together


(#) youcanstakemyheart 2012-04-17

Every time you post on here, I drop what I'm doing and rush to the internet to be amazed and awed by your latest updates. And damn, did this amaze. Gerard was (as per usual in these types of stories) being way to overprotective of Mikey. Pete was coming on much too strong, but that's a wonderful part of his character. I burst out laughing when he started interjecting with the custard. Poor Mikey though! I know what it's like to be self esteem-less and so sick that you're seeing Pete Wentz in your bed, but a dad that hates you? I just want to hug that boy till he explodes in a rain of guts and eyeliner. Great update and I can't wait for more!!

Author's response

Thank you very, very much!
Gerard as definitely being a little too protective of Mikey, even if Pete was coming on much too strong. I'm glad you think that it's a good part of Pete's character, I was kinda worried that it didn't work.
Yep; poor Mikey. He's got a lot of bad shit going on, the self-esteem issues and his dad being but two. I wanna hug him too!
Thank you very much for taking the time to review! :D