FicWad

Oh. My. God. That was absolutely amazing! I really don't understand how you can make the characters seem so real. It just completely amazes me. The chapter was a big risk, looking at the other chapters, but I'd say it was a good one. Most people tend to start rushing the relationship into the fifth chapter, and sometimes even earlier, but you're only hinting at a chance of a relationship at the nineteenth chapter. That's one of the things that makes this story feel so real. Another thing that's just amazing about this fanfic is that, with some characters, you just start out loving them or hating them, but your opinions change as the story goes on. I find myself forgiving Gerard, then wanting to slap him, and then forgiving him again. When I first started reading, I loved Ocean, but then I started to dislike her a bit. With most books, you have the exact same opinion of the character the entire way through, especially with fanfictions. In fact, I'd go so far as to say that this is one of the best I've ever read. I just can't find anything that needs to be changed. I really hope you feel better, though. I know that I probably could never really understand what you're going through, but if you ever want to talk, I'll listen.