I'm thinking maybe I should have read this before I started reading the story I was reading... because I got a little confused when the note said that you were one month pregnant AFTER I had reaad your bio saying you were a guy... awkward on my behalf.
But hey! Your writing is good, probably in the small percentage of stories I'd read on here (you know you're a serious english student when you can't read a story because it's just like INCORRECT GRAMMAR!! IT'S EVERYWHEREEEE!!) But enough of my psychobabble, maybe you could check out my story 'Give 'Em Hell Kid'? It would warm my ice cold heart if you did!
Nicola :)