Congratulations on being a nominee! You sure as hell deserve it, I'm not kidding. I looked at the shortlist and there are people on there you could totally beat. What I like about you is you're so original, like, a lot of the nominees just write Frerard-highschool smutt not even worth another glance at, but they're nominated because they have the most votes. And you know why that is? PEOPLE BUY SHIT. It applies to EVERYTHING. xD
As for this, it's amazing!! (as always!) So good, it's a shame it's only a two-shot because it would make a damn fine fic. Keep going with Hero and don't compare yourself to the likes of CosmicZombie and unitedsuck. I've read their stuff and really, it doesn't overwhelm me to be honest (sorry to anyone this offends, I know how much you people worship these guys).
Bravo!