HEROOOOOOO! (sorry, sorry, but I am so reading all of your fics until they're finished. These are the sort of stories that you love even if you don't ship the pairing. Ah it's just so perfect!!)
This chapter... Damn. Shit is totally going down. And not even in the secret agent kind cool way but the 'holy shit holy shit holy shit' kind of way. It's awesome. Like, fuck. I love you. You make me want to be a better writer. (someday people will be writing fanfiction about a book series we wrote together... Well, maybe not but I can dream. I think you certainly have a future in writing and GERARD DON'T LET FRANK GIVE THE DICK HEAD... Oh my word choice...) well, good job my friend. I eagerly await the next installment :)