Wow. This was great! The style was different, but no less good than what you usually write. Knowing how to write in different styles just makes you a better writer, anyway. I really, really enjoyed this! I liked that Gabe was a bit cocky, thinking he could get anyone he wanted. Of course he needed a bit of help from Pete, who I happen to believe is the greatest fairy godmother in existence. And Mikey's un-innocence towards the end was the icing on the cake. Gabe's attitude and the funny little things spread all throughout really made the story. This was awesome! Great job!!!
Thank you very much! I was very conscious of it being different to my normal writing, so it's really good to know that you think it went alright.
I'm extremely pleased that you liked this! Pete is the bestest fairy godmother in the history of Ever.
Thank you very, very much for taking the time to leave such a nice review! :D