This is brilliant. Different sort of style to your usual poems, but I love it so much! Seriously, it's great, and I love the message you're getting across. Another of your (amazing) poems into my favourites!
I've just noticed you've posted a frerard oneshot and am looking forward to reading it later xD
P.S. Thanks so much for your review on my poem :'D
Thank you very much!
This is very different to how I normally write, so it's a relief to know that you think it's alright!
I hope you enjoy the Frerard! :D
P.S. You are very welcome. :)