So I freaked a little on seeing this had been updated and boy did you deliver!
I actually love the pace the story is moving at, it keeps me on edge and I'm started to piece a few little bits together -detective face-
The line that really stood out to me was 'snagging wings of the butterflies' like seriously girl that shit was goooood
I can't wait to see where you take the story next!
Author's response
I'm so glad you like it :D I shall update soooon and thank you SO much for taking the time to write such a lovely review :'D