Review for Teach Me

Teach Me

(#) XxPerfectTomorrowxX 2012-04-26

It tied up quite a few things, like how life at school was without Gabe by Mikey's side. I'm sad to see the abuse continued, though for it to simply stop would be unrealistic.
Also, I love that Gabe has basically settled down with Mikey... That was cute.
You do really well to show readers the actions he's taken to make him seen as slut, all the while giving us insight in to who he really is and how much he cares for Mikey.
Once I have rating points again I'll attempt to come back and rate it +1 for insightful because both parts of this two-shot were very insightful. I'm sad to know it's over but I did enjoy it.

Author's response

I'm glad you think it tied up the loose ends. I wanted to show how things worked out for them, even if the bullying didn't stop.
It's good to know you think I gave some sort of insight onto Gabe's character in this. He was meant to be a kind of unintentional slut, like he couldn't really help himself but he truly does care about Mikey.
Thank you very, very much! :D