Omg. This chapter was great. Your tempo with this story is spot on and I like how you can make it peaceful and subtle...and then there's the suspense! You haz skeels. Don't apologise for a long chapter either, reading more = good. Actually I thought this chapter was pretty much the perfect length really.
Patiently sitting here, waiting for Gerard to show his pretty face. Ooh the tension! XP
SF
Author's response
Ahh, thank you! I'm glad you like it, especially as I'm a little unsure seeing as this is kinda a new style/storyline for me.
He'll make an appearance soon enough xD
Thanks again for reviewing, it means a lot :'D