This chapter was just full of heartbreak and emotion. :'( So sad.
I honestly can't think of anything else to say. It was brilliant. Despite the fact of the main theme - incest - you are actually a good writer, and that can mean the difference between a fic with a questionable theme turning out good or bad. So far, I'd say it's good.
I loved Brendon's fat cat. XD and the way he decided to piss the neighbors off by practicing louder to get back at them. :D
And, like before, I will be waiting for the next chapter.
Author's response
Aw, thank you. That really does mean a lot. :D
lol I loved throwing that in!
I'll try to update soon. Again, thank you so much for your feedback!