"Frank groaned and buried his fingertips into his hair, horrified that he had missed such a blatant opportunity. Gerard had practically been handing him his freedom on a silver platter and he had turned it down bitching about Mikey and punishment. He was a fool!"
Thank you for saying this...I mean, you're preaching to the choir with me but you're great okay! If you hadn't pointed this out I would have!
Three cheers for bad ass Jamia too! Most people annoy me with the way they characterize her but you, you've done something fantastic with it!
So for the rest of the story: let's do this shiz!
-Adnarim Smada
Author's response
Haha thanks? xD I'm glad I haven't destroyed your day with this one, and for the record I adore Jamia so I could never create her into some horrific cliche bitchy girl :') But still, I feel I tread on thin ice with this one xD
xo