but great story though I'd like to see a version where the burger showed up an hr or so earlier harry lives but things are bad enough that the police reaction is largely the same if not identical
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It’s been done before. As a matter of fact, I’m re-reading an excellent story along that general line on Ff.net, called ’30 Minutes That Changed Everything’ by Radaslab. While there are a few problems, the story is well thought out, researched, and written. I highly recommend it to anybody.
Alorkin