Amazing! Simply amazing! This is definitely one of my favourite sotires! I really love your writing style. Very different but very awsome. Your story is also incredibly original. I like the way that you introduced each hero. That was really neat. As for constructive crtism? I have only one thing. It's too short! Please make the next chatper longer. But if that's not the way you write then that's okay. Other than that I think that this story is absolutly amazing. Keep up the awsome work and please update soon.:D
Author's response
Too short? Be careful what you wish for. xD From where I can see, I've got a lot I plan to 'cram' (gracefully, of course) into the next chapter. I'm extremely proud of being on your 'favorites' list. ^-^ I've been catching glimpses of 'Illusion Island' periodically, and I've found myself cracking up at the smallest things in some of your stories.
'What's wrong with V8 juice?''It tastes like crap!'
I spent a lot of time laughing at that one; I had a conversation with one of my best friends that went almost exactly like the dialogue in 'Unwravelled Prophesy'. ^-^