That was brilliant! And the title idea was genius too...seriously, your poems...I love them. I feel like I'm repeating myself whenever I review, but I honestly mean every word.
I especially loved this line;
'Witness faith,
Not the souls it set alit.'
Dude, that's so fucking true. All of it was- I love things that don't gloss over the truth.
Simply brilliant.
CosmicZombie xo
Author's response
Aw, thank you very much! I'm glad you like my poems, even if most of them suck like cheap whores.
It's really nice to know that you see the truth in what I write, as that's what I always aim for with my writing.
Thank you very much for taking the time to be so lovely! :D