I loved this. it was the perfect mixture of creepily possessive, manipulative, romantic, and kinda rape-y. I couldn't help but feel a bit bad for Mikey; Gerard's awfully cunning to say that he's all his brother will ever have. But that's one of the things that makes it great.
Probably one of my favorite stories you've ever written, quite honestly.
OXO
Author's response
Wow, thank you very, very much! I'm glad you liked the mix of elements; the possessiveness behind Gerard's thoughts, the manipulation in his actions, the romance and the very rape-like sense to the whole thing. I kinda feel a little bad for Mikey too.
I wasn't too sure about this at first, it's quite different to what I normally write, so it's really nice to know that you liked it! :D