This is amazing! You've made a fantastic job of it. I can sort of see how Mikey is doing it for Gerard just because Gerard wants it. Like he doesn't know he wants. Gerard seems to come across a bit forceful and thinks this is what Mikey wants. I get the sense of Gerard just does what he likes to Mikey because Mikey won't say no. Gerard is very cunning and knows exactly how to get Mikey which makes me feel sorry for Mikey. Mikey doesn't get the chance to see what he really wants. I think Gerard doesn't see this and just thinks Mikey wants him. If any of that makes sense!!!
Either way, it is excellent and it was interesting to read it as it had sort of a different plot to it. Brilliant job! :)
Author's response
Thank you very much!
I'm glad you can see that maybe Mikey's just doing it for Gerard, as opposed to i being completely what he wants. I think he is kinda unsure about what he wants, so it's good that came through. Gerard certainly is very forceful, but I think that's because he thinks it's what Mikey wants and Mikey's just too shy/unsure to take it.
Thank you very, very much for taking the time to leave such a nice review! :D