(#) -Dead 2012-05-13
This is wonderful. Simply wonderful. The characterisation of Gerard was perfect; you managed to get the balance between possessive and caring just right. Waycest is one of those things where if you're not careful it can come out as entirely unrealistic (bearing in mind it's not really anyway, but sssh, let's pretend, yes?) and sometimes just plain cheesy. You don't need to worry about that though, because you write beautifully. :)
Oh, and a side note, this is the first story I've read on this site. So, I present to you, my FicWad virginity. ;)
Author's response
Thank you very, very much! I'm pleased you think I got Gerard right; I was a little worried that he came across as too possessive. Waycest definitely can come out as way too unrealistic (yes, let us pretend), so it's a relief to know you didn't this came across as too unreal/cheesy.
Why thank you, I very much enjoyed taking your virginity. ;P
Thank you very much for taking the time to review! :D