Whoa. That… wow. Oh my gosh. I had previously said that the last chapter was the best; I take that back now. This completely blew away everything that you've previously written. Even from te beginning with the short poem, which was beautiful, I could tell that this chapter was about to be the shit. This chapter was the shit. I love how you described his drunkenness and the atmosphere of the car, I love how he tried to call out to the car but was too quiet to be heard, I loved the way you described the forest and his growing fear and the chase. The chase was probably the best part for me. It was do intense and now I'm just laying here with my eyes wide open and unblinking and I am so impressed. I can't handle you. I don't know you as a person, but I do know that, as an author, you are perfection. Even though you have so many personal dilemmas and so many more important and productive things that you should be doing, you still somehow find the time to write and post the MOST beautiful and legit and fictitious-yet-relatable chapters that I have ever read in a fanfiction. And better than many of the books that I've read. I can't even thank you enough. I'll never be able to thank you enough for all that you put into these stories. I loved this chapter, an I hope that every other person who reads it will see how wonderful it is and give you the praise that you honestly deserve.
Author's response
Oh my god, thank you SO incredibly much, honey! This review like, made my whole god damn week! I'm smiling like a total loser right now, 'cause...ahh, just THANK YOU! :'D Honestly, your constant support and wonderfully detailed reviews are so, so appreciated. I feel so flattered :') Thank you very, very much for taking the time to leave such a lovely review! I'll update as soon as I can :)