(#) Vanir 2012-05-15
An interesting story to say the least. I do like the personality you have bestowed upon the characters, although i would have imagined Ginny as a bit more forward. With her maternally reinforced delusions of entitlement, i would expect her to assume Harry's undying devotion immediately. I did have a hard time accepting the crime-and-punishment thing in the beginning, but i don't feel it's important. You needed an innocent kid in the CJSystem so you made it so. I'm looking forward to the continuation. I've never read a story like this before and i quite like it.
Thanks
Vanir