Great story and looking foward to more keep up the good work.
love the hole dream walking thing too just great and nice layout too.
Author's response
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed the dreamwalking; it struck me as a reasonable way to get inside the characters' heads, so to speak.
I've made an effort to keep the chapters of this story (and my others) at a reasonable length. I know what I prefer, and I'm glad my readers do too.