I loved this chapter; it had drama, suspense, romance and that tiny bit of fluff at that beginning when Spencer was comforting Ryan after the nightmare.In short, it had everything I like in a chapter!
I thought Ryan was really cute after the nightmare, what with how he was reaching out for Spencer. That really showed how much Ryan relies on him for support and how much he loves/trusts him. The nightmare itself was a really cool idea because it showed us just how terrified Ryan is of Brendon.
When Jon and Spencer were kissing I wanted to scream at them for betraying Ryan like that and my heart broke for him when he walked in on them.
I hope that Spencer is okay and can patch things up with Ryan before he too does something drastic or goes back to Brendon.
Great job and please update soon!!! :D
P.S. Sorry for the long-ass review. :)
Author's response
It's fine.
I'm really really REALLY glad that you like it.
The next chapter I'm starting tonight, so it may be up Sunday or Monday night.
I don't want to give anything away, but things get pretty interesting for Ryan and Brendon.