Wow, Kitty.
That was awesome!
^^;
Inspires me to stop procrastinating and write the next chapter of Silence The Butterfly.
I'm still not sure if my stories are okay.
I'm sure you noticed I changed my writing style a bit...
It's because my friend pointed out to me that I had way too much description and not enough dialogue.
She made me start writing play format stories to work on good dialogue...
And ever since I've kind of toned down the excessive description.
=3
The other reason I changed my writing style was 'cause I realized I was getting so involved in description that it was becoming, well, "wolfspeak."
oO;
I'd never heard of the term before but I came across it on Neopets and it made me rethink my writing.
You know... "Fae of silvery pelt pranced daintily o'er the frost bitten terra, charcoal dipped tassel twitching absent mindedly."
Hehe... I haven't lost my ability to write like that, I've just buried it for now.
Oi meh. Enough of my rambling. I'm gonna go write now...
Author's response
'Awesome'? Neglecting all forms of grammatically correct language: "You ain't seen nothin' yet, sister." xD Yeah, last chapter... eh... not-so-great by my standards. Can't quite compete with you yet, Rye. But I'm getting there. Watch your back, Rye.... >=3 Bwaha.
Yes. Go update Silence the Butterfly. It will make Kitty extremely, unplaceably happy. =D
Rye, darling, your style is brilliant, whether its the buried format of 'wolfspeak' (yeah, I'm still guilty of random relapses xD) or your more dialogued format. You go write that story, 'cause it's like.... of the awesominity. x3