This. Is fucking. Awesome. Your writing blows my mind! You made a really good job out of youcanstakemyheart's suggestion and I think it really fits in with everything that has been happening to Mikey. It's perfect. I love how you can write a story with such little dialogue (considering Mikey is a mute.) and make it so adorably cute, yet sad at the same time. But I really love the whole concept of how much you can tell Mikey loves Brendon and how much he wants to tell him that but can't. And how you Brendon can see how much Mikey loves him and how much he loves Mikey. (I said 'how' way too many times there!)
Anyway, it is fantastic and I can't wait to see more Pete and Gerard in the story. I like youcanstakemyhearts suggestion above actually. I was thinking that Gerard could get a bit too protective and begins to worry over Mikey. But I'm sure whatever you write will be just as great as this! :)
Author's response
Wow, thank you soooooo much! It was an excellent suggestion, I'm just glad you think I made an alright job out of it. I was worried about the lack of dialogue in this (something that I can't really escape when half of it is Mikey) so I'm relieved you think I still managed to make it cute/sad. It's really good to know that the concept of Mikey wanting to talk to Brendon came through alright as that is one of the key foundation blocks of this series.
Thank you very much and the others will be springing up in the next installment!
Thanks for taking the time to leave such a helpful review! :D