"I am no good at high action fight scenes" biiiiiiiitch, who you trying to fool -_-
Anyway, jesus fucking christ, I was all YAY Frank and Gerard are going to make progress, then the other great meddler, Mikey, has to be a meddling...meddler. Turdface. I was just waiting for one of them to snap with the power struggle I liked that you didn't make one kill the other, just have one overpower one for a moment. Also glad you didn't have Mikey rape him.
Gotta say, in the psychological warfare, he takes the cake, the whole meat thing is brilliant, bacon wrapped chicken? Is that even a real thing?!
Fucking Jamia, Gerard got shot trying to save you, motherfucking Jamia.
Also, I don't think anyone ever is going to complain that a chapter's to long. Just saying. EVER
Author's response
I'm not xD At least... I don't think I am :')
I couldn't have had Mikey rape Gerard, that would have been just a little too far :') I did have fun writing the power struggle though, I'm a sucker of domination games XD
You've never had bacon wrapped in chicken!? Woman you need to get some of that stat! You get like, chicken breast or chicken fillets, wrap it in bacon, cook that shit up in the oven or in a frying pan and voila! Heaven :') And I can say that even though I'm vegetarian. Yep.
Fucking Jamia ;)
xo