Hey, so it's been so long since I read this, I've decided just to go read it from the start. Hope you don't mind...you might get quite a few reviews over the next week or so as I read it! :L Anyway, this chapter was very good- I loved how you created the atmosphere in the kitchen- the descriptions made it seem so real. I really empathized with this chapter- it was kinda freaky reading, though, 'cause it's almost exactly like me and my dad. I feel really bad for Frankie D; Great stuff, honey...I'm off to read the next chapter :D
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CosmicZombie xo