Okay, so I can see that I've already reviewed, but fuck it, I'm gunna review it again! This was really good...I love your Frank characterization- even though it's only chapter two, I've already got quite a strong sense of him, y'know? I loved the bit about the receptionist, nice touch- and why are like, ALL receptionists like that in real life?! 'Cause every one I've come across seems to be! Frank's dad is such a dick- my dad isn't quite that bad, thank god. Anyway, I'll read more tomorrow, 'cause I have to go revise. Fun stuff. Sorry this review is kinda long...hope you don't mind! Looking forward to reading more- this is just as good as I remembered it being! Awesomeness. :D
CosmicZombie xo