I like it. XD I am able to envision such tales because of your poetry. In this poem, I kind of see someone getting themselves out of an abusive relationship whether it be mentally or from an another actual living person. You're one of those poets who bring it all down to their final stanzas.
It's hard for me to find poetry that I actually want to read man but your's would be some.
-Adnarim Smada
Author's response
Thank you xD Another poem I wrote when I was thirteen :P This one is actually written around the time when a classmate of mine kept picking fights because she couldn't stand me. She's one of those witty girls who have a lot of foul words to pour, and she actually made me cry like a baby just by whispering mean words at my back in class, which is saying something...
Oh my, thank you! That is really flattering :3
-ImJustFine