Omfg! I love reading this story, especially the poems. You have a beautiful style of writing, and I have to admit, I've been slightly obsessed with it in its entirety (I have the link on my Booksie page and on my Facebook page and have shared it with some of my friends). You also check your spelling and grammar, which sores you some big points with me, since a lot of people don't. I really love how the story flows, like it isn't just stating an action and moving onto the next paragraph/sentence. Well, sorry for my rambling, but I really love a lot of your work! Can't wait for more!
Author's response
Thank you so much, honey! Awww, that's so sweet...I'm so glad you like it and thanks very much for reviewing! I'll update as soon as I can :)