This is really good. It's nice to find an original story that is actually written well :)
Author's response
why thank you! it's funny you should say that because I just finished reading an amazing story here on ficwad which was propably written by some famous bestselling author under a secret internet persona, it was so great that I completely lost my confidence in any possible writing skills I ever might've thought I had lol
So it's very nice to hear that I'm not totally hopeless!