Woah, this is beyond awesome. I normally don't really review, but I just had to this time. This (and all your stuff) is freaking amazing. Your characters are so realistic, and you write so descriptively. It's like I can actually see the story in my head, the way you write. Also, your metaphors are kind of my favorite thing on the planet. XD They're just so creative and great. :)
So yeah, I'm done fangirling now. XD
Rage & Love,
PrettyOddOwl