I like it so far. It's an interesting take on how Harry might have turned out had he been even more distrustful of adults and hadn't befriended Ron or Hermione. Surprising, I do like Myrtle in this. I usually don't much care for her, as she tends to come across as annoying, but I like the character that you gave her. Anyways, keep up the good work. I'll be looking for an update.
Author's response
I always thought that Myrtle was another underappreciated character. And believe me when I say, things will only get more interesting, especially once they realize that Harry is far from easily forgiving.