when i first noticed you had posted this i was all like "PRAISE THE LORD!! CosmicZombie has written a smut one-shot!!" and then i read it and it was really, really good. thank you! :D
seriously, you're a very good writer. you manage to write different things and make them awesome; think about this, BMD and TTETI. they're all different :D go, girl! i love your stories!