Ho. Ly. SHIT.
I'm telling you right now, Rocky Horror is my favorite movie of all time (Tied with Girl, Interripted) and seeing MCR and related people mixed with it is like a dream come fucking true. (Especially Mikey as Riff-Raff XD)
As this being something I'm really looking forward to, I kinda studied your other stories, especially what you just now put up- and OHMYGODFORGIVEME but Uh, your writing, not the plots or anything, but the grammar and spelling isn't really the best. Please don't shoot me! I'm already sort of picky with writing as it is, and you combining my favorite Movie and Band is kind of a huge thing for me. (See how much of a life I have?)
If you need a beta, or anything at all related to writing, you could just email me anytime at SDTV4LIFE@gmail.com. I would really prefer you do simple things like reading over your writing after you finish it, or even just using spellcheck! It's really easy and you'll most likely get more good reviews and ratings if your stories are proofed. I'm really sorry I'm pointing out all this, but I just want this story to reach it's full potential. I can tell it's going to be AMAZING.