I really hate to be mean so I apologize but, I find it hard (becuase I have bad A.D.D) to read SO much detail like you put in. I find myself getting tripped up and lost between paragraphs. Escpecially when characters are talking to eachother; I have to go back and reread because you put in so much detail between replies and I cannot recall what they were talking about or what was last said. Now for the good: I love the story line and I love Robbie's part in this :D can't wait to read on!