Wow... All I can say is wow. This is so amazing. I agree with all the other reviews. Your writing and metaphors are so amazing even if they are bleak and sad but it makes the whole story work and much better because of your writing skills. Well done! (: I'm sure the next chapter will be amazing and the rest of this story. xo
Author's response
Thank you so much! :'D That means a lot...I'll update soon!