I know this may be a bit rude of me to ask and tell me if it is. But would you mind reading my story 'Sell Your Soul For A Chance At Love' ? Just to see if there is ANYTHING wrong, like spellings and such. I'm really bad a noticing things and even though i use spell check, sometimes wrods are still spelt wrong.
If not, then it's all good. I don't want to come across as rude.
I think what you've done is awesome, Adding something like this to the site to help people improve there writting.
Much love