Review for Mine
I'm still very intrigued by the story. The wording and setting is very well laid out. No grammatical or spelling errors so far. I also like that it paints a very real picture of what's going on. The characters appear real and spontaneous, and Jeff is like I would picture him in his own element. I noticed you mentioned it was a short chapter but I found no problem with this at all. It was still very good and communicated the scene perfectly.