Review for Personalised Oneshots!!

Personalised Oneshots!!

(#) Gerard_inspires_me 2012-06-11

Band member/OC:
OC name: Allana Monroe
OC age:18
OC appearance:Tall, dirty-dishwater blonde, a little pudge on her stomach and thighs. She is beautiful, but not fake. She usually wears some sort of comfortable t-shirt with brightly colored skinny jeans
OC personality: Alanna is shy (in fact she has social anxiety, it's so bad that she gets nervous when she is called on during class!), unless around friends. If this is the case she will be overly loud and obnoxious... like she's trying to oush them away or seem insane. She is overly self-conscious (as in, she doesn't think she deserves to be with anyone except some abusive bastard who will kill her, if she ends up wih anyone at all!), she has daddy problems and has a lot of self-hatred. She is a goody-two-shoes most of the time. She's never been drunk, high, anything. hell, she's still a virgin. But, that comes with the territory of never having a boyfriend. (sorry I rambled!)
Band member: Gerard Way
Era:Revenge, but like right around her age
Basic plot: Alanna just moved to Belleville after her parents split up, she was forced to move in with her abusive father. Her mother stayed in the little suburb of Toledo she originally lived in. She gets a job where Gee works and he tries to befriend her. even though she pushes him away, there is something about those bright blue eyes that makes him unable to stop from falling for her.
Other notes:You can change this up if you want! You don't have to ask me or anything either... just have fun with it!