This is just... GENIUS! Amazing. Just so amazing! It does not suck at all. Not even close. It just has so much emotion and like a really strong meaning behind it. Absolutely beautiful! It was cool because I was just listening to "The Pros and Cons of Breathing" and I was just thinking of how it was kind of relating! Brilliant. I don't know what to say except just that you are brilliant!!! :)
Author's response
Aw, thank you very much! I'm really relieved you think it doesn't suck and that you could sense the meaning/emotion behind it as that is always my goal when writing anything. It's awesome that you could hear the two relating!
Thanks! :D