This was very good. your hard work really paid off. i'm very glad to see your writing skills have only gotten better with everything you wrote, and has only inspired me to do some more writing of my own.keep writing and keep doing what you love. i love you! can't wait to see more of your fanfic!
Author's response
It was very nice of you to review my first story when I first joined this website. Your words are very kind and inspirational. You are not only the first one to review my work but remain the only one to do so. But in any sense I thank you. I wish you ludk on your future writings.
Sorry about the typo.