I really liked it. It was original, cute, and overall was enjoyable :3
The only part that I didn't like was actually something that Frank said. When he's telling Gerard who took his journal, (CUZ HE'S TO MANLY FOR A DIARY.), and he says 'Jocks' to describe them. Fuck I can't begin to say how much I hate that word. That along with 'preps' >.< I dunno, it just seems so overused and cliche. Yanno, the 'joke pickin' on the Emos" it just is extremely annoying. If he would have said 'those kids that always pick on me' or something, it would be a little more believable. Just saying. I really hope I didn't come of as mean :/ That's just something I despise.
Author's response
Heheh thanks for the review! I kinda hate that word too, but I couldn't think of something to replace it, so I stuck it in there. It annoys me too, especially cos I hate stereotypes. I think I may go change it for 'those kids that always pick on me' now...
Megan :)