Review for Translations of Blood

Translations of Blood

(#) amos222 2012-06-14

I think that was the best chapter yet. (I feel like I've said that about the last three chapters, but only because they keep getting better). I love Ray!! I don't think you've yet added a character that I dislike, which is kind of cool. I always postpone reading this story because I like it so much and I'm constantly paranoid that when I enjoy a fanfiction, I overestimate and get these huge expectations that aren't ever reached, but this story is the exception. I love the whole feel of the story and the way it can feel really dreamy and fantastic, and then become super normal and relatable. I thought that the beginning part was really cool. It felt like some kind of historical novel at first, and I was picturing 19th century gentlemen and big skirts and dusty carriages or something. And I think that she was talking to Gerard, but maybe I'm wrong. Thank you for the update, and I can't wait for the next chapter!!!