Okay so i realllllyyy dont wanna be mean beciase being mean is.. Well, mean. I think this moving a bit too slow.. But it DID pick up some on this chapter. I really like the story line; and love how gerard has arguments with himself. Update soon?
Author's response
Yeah, I thought it was going a bit slow, but I wanted to know what other people thought, so don't worry about being mean, I can't improve if I don't know what I'm doing wrong, so thanks :) Yeah I'm writing an update now so maybe tomorrow it'll be up x